Hello, Carly!

I happened to see the title of your poem in my news feed and was intrigued. Then I read it and enjoyed it so decided to give you a review. I hope you enjoy this celebration of your time here and find the review uplifting.



INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:
I loved this uplifting poem of yours! Well done!

You kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end. Well done!



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

My favorite line was: "Paint the scenes you want to live." I loved the imagery of someone more artistic than I am actually painting the scene of their day and bringing it to life. Well done!


Your whole poem felt uplifting and encouraging. The perfect way to end my day and start thinking about tomorrow. Thank you. Well done!

The rhyming lent well to your poem and felt like it made it even more uplifting. Well done!

I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your lovely poem. Well done!

Your inspirational poem was interesting to me, felt like it was coming straight from your heart and soul, and made me want to read your next one. Well done!



IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
I would love to have something great to share here, but I think it's perfect as it is. Well done!




CONCLUSION:
You have a great writing style and sense of encouragement and I enjoy reading your poems and other writings. Well done!

Thank you for sharing your time, heart, community spirit, and writing with the Writing.Com community!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler










Positive Hearts
A Review from: "Positive Hearts Reviews Group" 



My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .