"Game of Thrones" 

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The Iron Bank of Braavos  (13+) For G.o.T. Activity #1994693 by Gaby

Hi! My name is Sandra. I am one of the sly foxes.           Title: Greetings!          First Impression: Okay, the exclamation mark drew me in. It's very noticeable, dare I say alluring. I appreciate the use of a well-placed exclamation. Then I noticed the different offerings and I passed to intrigued.          What needs your attention: I cannot think of anything to offer in the way of improvement. Your c-notes are as advertised.          What part I liked best: I am drawn to your humour as a moth to a flame. You've imagined what to say and how to present it without ruffling feathers. Who hasn't stumbled with this faux pas: I've put my foot in my mouth. The inspiration in 'Who can? You can' is heartfelt. OOO, I like animation. The alternative c-notes are my favourite. A bear nodding off reading something? An attempt to correct punctuation emphasized with a reference to a missed period and a pregnancy? Who doesn't appreciate a laugh?          Overall Impression: You offer much for the word aficionado.          Thank you for allowing me to read your work. it has been my pleasure.          What does the fox say??? Listen carefully.          DISCLAIMER: The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise.