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 Review #4741413 |
 | Chester's Imaginary Friend Lester  [E] "The Humorous Poetry Contest" - November 2023  |
| (3.5)| Hallo! I visited your portfolio because it's your WDC Anniversary. The title intrigued me since I had an imaginary friend too, as a child. It's very relatable, the lack of someone to talk to leading to an imaginary friend and the reactions of the people around. You've depicted that well. Um -- you've classified this as 'comedy' but I responded to it with empathy, not humour! Suggestions: 1. I didn't understand the second line - about 'demand'. Who was in demand, Chester or Lester? 2. I'm not familiar with the poetry form. Maybe a note about it, at the conclusion of the poem ... ? Thanks for sharing this relatable piece! Happy WDC Anniversary! - Sonali  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 05/17/2024 @ 9:37am EDT