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 Meet Me at the Castle Open in new Window. [E]
writer's cramp entry--prompt:meet me at the castle
by ridinghhood-p.boutilier Author Icon
Review by GERVIC Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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House Targaryen image for G.o.T.
In House Targaryen,
there'll be

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Greetings ridinghhood-p.boutilier Author IconMail Icon!

I am currently reviewing as part of the tasks set by the "Game of ThronesOpen in new Window.. The task can be found in this post "The Raven - 1"  Open in new Window.. I found your poem through the Read and Review section of this site, I enjoyed reading it and decided to give you this review. In this review, I mainly focus on the positives of your piece and I may point some Areas for Improvement if found any. Without much a do, here are the things I noticed after delving deeper into the contents:


Structure and Form

The poem's free verse form reflects the fluidity of its imagery and themes. There's a sense of urgency, underlined by the lack of punctuation in some lines and the short, declarative nature of others. This creates a breathless yet intimate atmosphere, as if the speaker is confiding in the reader.

The sudden shifts in tone, from spiritual to playful to scientific, mirror the fragmented nature of the speaker's experience. It suggests that even within their interior castle, they cannot entirely escape the external world's anxieties and contradictions.


Symbolism

The Castle: While initially evoking a classic fairy tale trope, this castle is immediately redefined as an internal, spiritual haven. This subversion sets the stage for the poem's focus on introspection and the search for something beyond external constructs.

Gold: Traditionally a symbol of wealth and value, the "flecks of gold" take on a different meaning. They could represent the fragile beauty within imperfection, or even the transformative potential inherent within the self (similar to the concept of kintsugi in Japanese pottery).

Carbon-14: This unexpected scientific element introduces a subtle threat. The isotope, linked to atomic testing, is a reminder of the insidious ways external events can mark the body – a powerful counterpoint to the self-created, protective space of the castle.



Additional Interpretations

Queer Identity: The invitation to "come in drag," paired with the themes of transformation and play, could be interpreted as offering a safe space for exploring gender identity and expression within this inner realm.

The Body and Impermanence: The emphasis on gold flecks and the radioactive carbon-14 might also hint at a preoccupation with aging and mortality. The internal castle becomes a refuge where even decay holds a certain shimmering beauty.



Ambiguity as a Strength

The poem's refusal to provide easy answers is one of its greatest strengths. It allows diverse interpretations based on individual experiences. This openness leaves the reader feeling like a co-creator of meaning within the imaginative space the poem constructs.


Ultimately, this is a beautiful poem worth reading. Thank you so much for sharing this to us. Write on!


Best regards,
Gervic

GoT House Targaryen :: Gervic


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