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 | Autumn in Las Vegas  [E] The wind chill factor in a tourist city  |
| (5.0)   Greetings, Prosperous Snow celebrating! I am reviewing this because I discovered it in Read & Review.  First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest. What I Liked Your acrostic is well written. Great flow, too! I love that you mentioned tourist ((( ))) because even though I wasn't visiting California in autumn, as a camping Snowbird, I did stay on BLM land (Bureau of Land Management) for at least four weeks (on and off) in southeastern California January through March, on the Colorado River (west of Yuma, AZ.) At that time, southern California was getting some bad storms and lots of wind, which we definitely got the winds, but thankfully, little rain. Yeah, that wind chill factor sure makes a difference!    Suggestions/Comments to ConsiderNo suggestions whatsoever! Final ThoughtsDid you see the Starlink Satellite soar through? We were camping and didn't know what the heck it was! Meteorite? Aliens?  I finally looked it up on my phone. It was quite a sight! Okay, so that has little to do with the acrostic, but sometimes one thing leads to another! Anyhow, I obviously enjoyed your poem.  Have a great day and... K e e p on W r i t i n g ! Cubby ")
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