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I Think I Do Open in new Window. [E]
Falling in love, written from my husband's point of view.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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What a lovely, lovely poem about the confusion one feels on falling in love! You've covered the various aspects of this feeling well, managing to put words to what many wouldn't be able to capture thus.

I like it all but my favourite has to be the repeated phrase.

The tone is warm and fuzzy and happy, really feel-good. The rhyme scheme and verse structure work well.

Question: Did you show this poem to your husband? If you'd be okay with this suggestion, I'd love to see a note about his response to it! *Smile*

My only other suggestion is for WritingML - font, size, colour, center.

Thank you for the smile.

Write On!
- Sonali

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