Hi Legerdemain! I was wandering through your port and I came across many really pretty poems. I chose this one because your title and brief description captured my attention. It's the perfect time of year here where the Daffodil's might be in their slumber while they wait for Spring!

In my opinion, your poem had an artsy feel. It was simple, in an artsy way, yet it was able to tell an entire story with finely chosen poetic words. It made me think that the author is a bit of an artist. I know you are great with images, so maybe this is true.

I thought the centered presentation and the genres you chose, (nature, environmental, etc.) added to the setting and atmosphere well.

Your opening stanza set the scene for the rest of the poem to follow.
I could imagine from your descriptive words, daffodils asleep for the winter, under the blanket of snow. I don't know much about flowers, but I'll assume they are flowers which bloom again when the spring and better weather comes. April Showers bring May flowers?

I like how you can make your readers see the sun, without actually mentioning the sun...spring rays. I felt that was very clever.

Your creativity continued with all of the other stanzas. I could picture the pretty flowers just beginning to bloom, nodding their faces. I was impressed again, how you can describe the scene without telling what's actually going on.

I felt that you continued to set the mood of the poem by hinting that the flowers are soothing to people viewing them.

I interpreted the ending to mean that the cycle was going to end and start over again. Nice work!

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