Hello Ruth,

I am Kristina and I am here to give you a "Game of Thrones"  review and rate it. I came back to your portfolio so that I may read Under the Waves.

Overall Impression:
I enjoyed reading this story very much. I captured my attention from the beginning and held it to the end. It was easy to follow the POV from character to character to narrator. I couldn't wait to see what was going to happen.

Plot:

This a story about two young people exploring the ocean in search of proving or disproving the myth about the existence of a labyrinth. This was a very interesting plot.

Style/Tone:

Your word choice, sentence structure, and figurative language were very effective.

Scene/Setting:

The time, place and setting characteristics blended and worked well together.

Grammer/Spelling/Punctuation:

I saw no issues in this area.

Characters:

Your characters are well-developed and believable.

Dialogue:

The dialogue flowed smoothly and was easy to follow.

What I liked Best:

I enjoyed being kept in the dark as to the final outcome.

Suggestions:

I just have one. When Ash and Sara were communicating, were they underwater? If so, how were they communicating, sign language, underwater writing pad, some sort of device in a helmet that allowed transmissions? This confused me a bit.

Kristina

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