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Hi Kenzie

My name is Lyn, I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: Autumn, Won't You Stay a While

First Impression: The author included a beautiful visual image for the reader to immerse not only in the words but the picture as well. Perfect balance. I love the way the different trees colors vary as well.

What needs your attention: This reader noted the highlighted words a visual reminder of the season in the first stanza and the opening line of each stanza was in brown except the last one in black but didn't see the significance of brown highlighted in the third stanza. Just curious if I missed something. Also I noted the repeated lines but not in the final stanza.

What part I liked best: I enjoyed the different visual settings the author shared in each stanza. I love maple and oak trees the best because of their offering in the fall.

Overall impression: A beautiful poem with the added bonus of a visual image to put the reader in the moment with the author. Thank you.

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What does the Fox say????? Be well.


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