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The Iron Bank of Braavos  (13+) For G.o.T. Activity #1994693 by Gaby

A Review From The Iron Bank Of Braavos

Hi Ben. I am Megan, one of the sly foxes.

Title: Spooky Mission

First Impression: This is a spooky story and I thought it involved ghosts but it was a paranormal of another kind. I was intrigued and so I had to read more to see what was going on. I read this and will be giving my observations. I wasn't disappointed. I was spellbound and curious.

What needs your attention: I really don't know what needs improving. It was a vampire and not a ghost. The vampire didn't win and that is a good thing. I would like to know what Emily, the vampire looked like.

What part I liked best: This is a castle, not a haunted house. An old man and huis man servant. I like the man servant term. I like that Andrew was fighting a vampire and not a ghost. The characters are well defined and so is the storyline.

Overall Impression: Looks like you spent time with this. A good style and easy to follow. I a glad I read this in the daytime and not at night. Creative and colorful. Spooky an dark. Looks like the mission was successful. A good style. I like the gothic effect of the castle. I wonder if Emily is related to Dracula. An excellent presentation.

The views and opinions are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore do not reflect necessarily to the activity, group, and / or event being affiliated within. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author to consider this as a corrective action or otherwise. Thank you for letting me review your work. It has been my pleasure.