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Hi Jody

My name is Lyn, I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: Role Play

First Impression: Sometimes couples need a little bit of role play to spice their lives up. I think the author presented an interesting role play opportunity from the awkward moments as the scenario unfolded. Chris seemed reluctant but did eventually go on as planned.

What needs your attention: I think what is missing for this reader was a sense of setting. As I read I struggled with where the couple was and where the crevice would be investigated.

What part I liked best: I chuckled at six o'clock or aka sex o'clock and the tools were ready. Better or worse. It's a huge unknown for anyone. I know my first husband was the nicest man while we dated, the monster didn't appear until after we were married.

Overall impression: The author shared an interesting story about a couple exploring role play as a means to spice up their marriage. Role play unfortunately increased after 50 Shades of Grey was released. People aren't aware of the risks involved when they carry things too far.

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What does the Fox say????? And the games are on...


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