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Haiku I --- On Winter  [E]
This is my first real attempt to write haiku --- at the behest of a WdC friend. Bedankt!
by Humble_ PNG
Review by Past Member 'ashok25'
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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It's truly a fantastic poetry. But, there is little confusion about whether it is a perfect Haiku or not. It deals with the season. This is the beauty of Mother Nature. It's a characteristic of a Haiku. But ultimately, it draws an image of our heart. That is a characteristic of an ideal Senryu, not a Haiku. So it is a traditional Japanese Senryu.
However, it is undoubtedly a good tiny poetry. That effort impressed me a lot.
Carry on this wonderful performance.

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