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The Iron Bank of Braavos  (13+) For G.o.T. Activity #1994693 by Creeper Of The Realm

A Review From The Iron Bank Of Braavos

Title: Starting Over

Hi Webwitch. I am Megan, one of the sly foxes.

First Impression: My grandparents raised me more then my parents. My father was in the Air Force and went to Vietnam and Mom and I stayed with my grandparents. When Dad wasn't in Vietnam, we lived in other states and I stayed with my grandparents every summer. Mom and Dad would go to North Carolina and I stayed with mt grandparents for two months. Okay. I had to read this because it was about you living with your grandparents. I was hooked and I wanted to read more. I am here visiting.

What needs your attention: I think you got this covered. You didn't miss a beat and this is easy to follow.

What part I liked best: He wanted you to start over and you would make him proud. You stayed with him for an hour after he died and praying over him. Loving and respecting his orchard.

Overall Impression: You were a devoted granddaughter. Nicely written details and you told the story well about you and your grandfather's relationship. A nice style and creative. A good presentation and I share your emotions. Heart touching story. I have been there.

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