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Boiled Peanuts, Grits and Straw Hats Open in new Window. [ASR]
A prose-oem of a fond farewell to a home away from home
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Title: Boiled Peanuts, Grits and Straw

Hi Webwitch: I am Megan, one of the sly foxes.

First Impression: A Scottish couple hosting a farewell party. Looks like they have some Scottish Proverbs and I like all kinds of Proverbs. I had to read this and I knew I wouldn't go away disappointed. I didn't. Boiled peanuts. They sound good. Here are my observations.

What needs your attention: Boiled peanuts. Grits. Straw hats. I guess I am not sure why this is the title but I think Scottish Proverbs and Family Fun would have been a fun title. This is just me.

What part I liked best: Women in evening gowns. Men all dressed up. Holding proud thoughts in our hearts. Silver crystal. I like fancy things in life and I like all the references to fancy things. I like how the bonds of friendship prevail. Fine China. Not chinet. I agree. I like the idea of good reflections and a party. I liked the idea of a Scottish couple hosting the party.

Overall Impression: A good style. Lovely reflections. Creative and colorful. A Dark handsome man knocking at your door. Good thought. This is heartwarming. Looks like you spent time with this.

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