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 Wind of Daisies Open in new Window. [E]
My wind, over the silent daisies.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Hallo!
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I love the old-world feel of the language used, the verse structure and the imagery. You bring out various aspects of nature to depict the passing of time, and the poem is full of nostalgia and yearning.

I like the personification of the wind, and the various synonyms of wind. Maybe you could use 'breeze', too.

A special shout out for the title, brief description, genres and layout of the piece - all work well.

Thanks for sharing this poem!
Write On,
Sonali

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