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The Iron Bank of Braavos  (13+) For G.o.T. Activity #1994693 by Gaby

"Game of Thrones"  Hello fellow writer! My name is Sandra. I am one of the sly foxes.Title: A Thanksgiving StoryFirst Impression: OMG! The desperate things a hostess will connive to do never cease to amaze me. This is a new and unique turkey-thawing method indeed. Even the determined lengths you went through to attain a second satisfactory sacrificial bird were something akin to the actions of a super hero. And a hungry bear absconded with one of your birds just before the family festivity? this story has all the makings of a comedy scene straight from a movie. Have you shared your unusual, yet ingenious plan with a Mrs. Doubtfire type character?What needs your attention: Sorry to be all nit-picky. There's a wayward comma on the loose in the third paragraph describing : "over twenty pounds,". Other than that wee typo all is well, fantastic.What part I liked best: I love the new names you assign to your reconfigured cooking assistive devices. The "auxiliary refrigeration system" aka the porch is funny. I have relatives who utilize this very same system in the winter. Bears hibernate then. The hot tub becomes "the great hot pot". Hot-tubbing with a portly frozen turkey? Amusing! I can picture this and the rum eggnog rounds out your nonchalance perfectly. That you pull off this feat in the wee hours under the handy cover of darkness like a subversive mission is great fun.Overall Impression: I laughed throughout reading this hilarious tale. That you did not induce food-poisoning is a definite bonus. What an impressive secret to taunt the family with. Thank you for allowing me to read your work. It has been my pleasure! What does the fox say??? Listen carefully.(1775 characters)DISCLAIMER: The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise.