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Hi Webbie

My name is Lyn, I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: Totem Wolf

First Impression: The narrative poem gives the reader the opportunity to learn from the author about her spiritual journey. Did you also do shadow work during your self-discovery journey?

What needs your attention: Narrative poem or as some others call prose poem tells a story Nothing needs changing.

What part I liked best: I enjoyed the whole poem but I was drawn particularly to the part about being shown another way existed and that the narrator hadn't reached their true potential. My husband is always telling me I haven't fulfilled my potential yet... he believes I was meant to do more. I don't see what he sees but I do appreciate being loved and believed in. Maybe like the narrator I let time dwindle as well because I got lost along the way.

Overall impression: A nicely woven spiritual journey, Webbie. Spiritual discovery and then learning all we can about ourselves and our spirit guide to make wiser decisions for the future is something everyone should do.
I felt the flow was good and the word choices work.

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