I found your work of heart on the public reviews page. It's always fun to see if one agrees or disagrees with the previous reviewer. Turned out that I both agreed and didn't agree.

This was fun to read aloud. While reading it silently, I could understand why the previous reviewer said that the meter makes one stumble. But reading aloud fixed that. It sounded great. Good flow, good rhymes, and makes a person laugh. What more could anyone want?

Thanks for sharing.

Blessings,
Kenzie