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Hi Webbie,

My name is Lyn, I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: No Good Deed Goes Unpunished

First Impression: I've done the sojourn more than once to clean my mother's home. It was exhausting and my children were far from amused with hauling all the crap off to good will and the dump only to return six months later to see she had accumulated even more. The woman had a lawn sale addiction.

Yes, I agree good deeds do get punished and then some.

What needs your attention: Nothing needs changing. But I will mention my pet peeve, you're killing me with the font size. I know, go away!

What part I liked best: Swimming in the pool sounded awesome but I knew after a hard day at cleaning that wasn't happening. Your poor son had to deal with four sisters, too. He's an angel!
I hate they put the water valves behind the washing machine, our overflowed and I had to pull the washer out to shut it off while worrying I was going to get electrocuted.

Overall impression: Another interesting glimpse in Webbie's world. The story flows smoothly. I felt tired and I didn't any of the cleaning at Grandma's Nicely done, Webbie.

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What does the Fox say????? review 8 of 10


My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .