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 | How I Became An April Fool  [E] Written for April 2024 DWG contest  |
| (4.5)   Greetings, ! I am reviewing this because I am part of "I Write in 2024" and you posted previous to me.  First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest. What I Liked I liked how you began this piece of how you perceived April Fool's as a child, and then a college student, and a baby boomer. My favorite lines are:Finally I realized my sense of humor, Was that of a baby boomer.  You seemed to have followed all the rules/guidelines for the contest.  I liked your Poet's Note, which gave all the information about the prompt, poetry form, line count, and the contest where you sent this piece. I loved your title: How I Became An April Fool Suggestions/Comments to ConsiderThe only thing... it seemed a few lines had more syllables here and there, which threw the meter off just a tad. Other than that, everything else was great! Final ThoughtsI got such a kick out of this, Neva.  Best of luck in the contest!Have a great day and... K e e p on W r i t i n g ! Cubby ")
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You responded to this review 04/11/2024 @ 5:49pm EDT