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Title: The Coffee Monkey

Hi Foxtale: I am Megan, one of the sly foxes.

First Impression: I was sad to read the dog died. Your kids wanted you to get another dog. You weren't sure. You said you would think about it. A new puppy can heal the hurt so I decided to read this and see shat happens. I am giving a review and my thoughts as well as my observations. Stay tuned.

What needs your attention: You said you had an old dog that died. You got a puppy that helped. You are writing this saying you didn't get another dog, yet. I was confused.

What part I liked best: You said you wished you could teach the dog to make coffee. Your wife suggested getting as pet monkey. The monkey could make the coffee. I laughed. I would want a monkey to dance, sing and clean house as well as make meals. Food for thought.

Overall Impression: I read it again and I guess there isn't another dog, yet. Well rounded characters and good dialogue. I guess you are the monkey who makes coffee. I feel like a maid but my husband helps out. The monkey is a good idea. I appreciate the humor in this. A good presentation. Entertaining. I was happy to have found this.

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