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Hi Hi Warped Sanity, It's been too long since we've crossed paths.

My name is Lyn, I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: I Killed Him Beneath The Wolf Moon.

First Impression: I wanted to kill Carl too reading how he treated you. It's always difficult trying to decide what to do next when there are children involved. I know for me I was more scared what he would do to my children if I wasn't there to protect them.

What needs your attention: I didn't see any punctuation or grammar issues.

What part I liked best: It's kind of strange we just had a solar eclipse on Monday and here I am reading your piece and you're mentioning a lunar eclipse that you're watching with Joe. I've always been drawn to the Wolf Moon and despite the cold I would sit outside and contempt my life.

Overall impression: This is a personal story shared by the author. It was very direct about a time in her life with an abusive spouse.

Did you get to see the solar eclipse where you live? It wasn't visible here in Las Vegas but both my sons saw it in Maine. I hope this finds you well.

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