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Hi Warped Sanity

My name is Lyn, I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: A Heart Concealed

First Impression: I was hooked from the word familiar, and the altar. We share another interest I'm Pagan as well. My altar has a mix of ravens and crows surrounding Morrighan, my chosen goddess.

I loved having the crow join her for breakfast. I laughed when the crow attacked him. I believe crows and ravens see evil for what is.

What needs your attention: I didn't notice any distractions.

What part I liked best: I had an odd feeling that Robert wasn't Mr. Nice after Jeckle attacked him so when he asked her to join him in the basement my sixth sense oh no.
Jeckle taking another form was surprising and connecting the dots on the painting of the man without a face came together nicely.

Overall impression: This was an interesting story about two artists that hooked up. Marisa realized once her pet crow disliked him there was probably reason not to continue a relationship but then agreed to come to his place where she definitely was in harms way until Jeckle aka , Malpas arrived. well done! The pacing was perfect.

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What does the Fox say????? Review 2 of 5.


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