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Hi Warped Sanity

My name is Lyn, I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: The Rabbit Hole

First Impression: Oh boy, this is going to be a fun night at the cabin. Poor sucker never saw that coming. I initially thought they were planning a three-some but this was a whole lot more fun. Having someone tied to the bed at your mercy sounds delightful to me.

What needs your attention: I didn't look, I was to engrossed in the story.

What part I liked best: The waffle iron was interesting. But the skull hammer I was really curious what they were doing to him. I was hoping for more details. Two days of torture was pretty sweet but I was hoping to get some more fun details.

Overall impression: I didn't see any mention of contest entry so I'm assuming you wrote this for fun. Great story line with an unusual name for the location. Until I began reading I had no idea what to expect outside of the rating as horror. It was a fun read. I don't know if anyone has ever told you but horror is your well house.
I was curious what a skull hammer was, That could do some serious damamge.

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What does the Fox say????? Review 4 of 5


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