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 Liminal  [E]
Logic or intuition
by Mirage
Review of Liminal  
Review by Past Member 'ashok25'
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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It's a very thoughtful free-verse poetry that tells about an intuition which can be earned from that kind of experience only.
Loneliness is a curse. Therefore, the person screams silently for a friend to share their feelings. But, that pain remains untold. So, that human has to live a lonely life.
We often face many obstructions in our lives. It is quite obvious. Sometimes, our critical psychology doesn't allow to settle us again.
But, in the end, the poet adds a positive message for us. God lives inside our hearts as an eternal soul. He can not leave us. He will accompany us. That must inspire us to be a devotee of the Almighty.
It's an excellent beginning.
Keep writing.

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