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 | Bubba's Corner BBQ  [E] Best BBQ in Arkansas  |
| (4.0)| GAMES OF THRONES POEM REVIEW This is a review for "Bubba's Corner BBQ" from House Targaryen for "Game of Thrones"  The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise.  THE POEMSam and Maria go to Hope, Arkansas in hopes of eating at Bubba's Corner BBQ only to find out there are 5! Yikes!  WHAT I LIKEDI liked that the poem was easy to visualize in my imagination as I read it. And the best direction I ever heard was to go catawapmus from the First Baptist Church.  STRUCTUREThis is a free form poem with no set rythme scheme. MECHANICSI did not spot any punctuation mistakes. I would check the following line: "For driections as their GPS," as I think direction" is misspelled. Good use of WDC ML to increase the font and make it easy on the eyes to read. DESCRIPTIONSI liked: "It is catawapmus from the First Baptist Church." I hate to repeat myself, but I just thought this was a hoot! Trying to picture going catawapmus from anywhere has me befuddled.  PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONSThe opening engages the reader. A fun, light-hearted little poem about the Corner BBQ. If anything, I would suggest just touching on this a hint more: Bubba moved the Corner BBQ to somewhere else, but I wasn't sure where he moved it? Then again, do I need a know? The poem made me chuckle and that's a good thing. Reviewed by StephB for House Targaryen  }
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