\"Writing.Com
*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
Printed from https://shop.writing.com/main/my_feedback/action/view/id/4744105
Review #4744105
Viewing a review of:
 Bubba's Corner BBQ Open in new Window. [E]
Best BBQ in Arkansas
by JCosmos Author Icon
Review by StephBee Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (4.0)
Access:  Public | Hide Review (?)
GAMES OF THRONES POEM REVIEW

This is a review for "Bubba's Corner BBQOpen in new Window. from House Targaryen for "Game of ThronesOpen in new Window.

House Targaryen image for G.o.T.

The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise.

*Reading* THE POEM

Sam and Maria go to Hope, Arkansas in hopes of eating at Bubba's Corner BBQ only to find out there are 5! Yikes!

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

I liked that the poem was easy to visualize in my imagination as I read it. And the best direction I ever heard was to go catawapmus from the First Baptist Church.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is a free form poem with no set rythme scheme.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any punctuation mistakes. I would check the following line: "For driections as their GPS," as I think direction" is misspelled. Good use of WDC ML to increase the font and make it easy on the eyes to read.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "It is catawapmus from the First Baptist Church." I hate to repeat myself, but I just thought this was a hoot! Trying to picture going catawapmus from anywhere has me befuddled. *Laugh*

*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The opening engages the reader. A fun, light-hearted little poem about the Corner BBQ. If anything, I would suggest just touching on this a hint more: Bubba moved the Corner BBQ to somewhere else, but I wasn't sure where he moved it? Then again, do I need a know? The poem made me chuckle and that's a good thing.

Reviewed by StephB for House Targaryen

Sigil for Game of Thrones 2024 }
   *NoteR* You have not yet responded to this review. Ignore
Printed from https://shop.writing.com/main/my_feedback/action/view/id/4744105