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| (4.5)| GAMES OF THRONES POEM REVIEW This is a review for "Bobby-Q" from House Targaryen for "Game of Thrones"   The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise.  THE POEMThe poem gives directions to Bubba's Corner BBQ which has the best Bobby-Q ribs ever. I just hope I don't get lost!  WHAT I LIKEDUsing a dialect is never easy and can be very challenging if you don't get it quite right. I thought this poem did a pretty descent job with the dialect. It was easy enough to read and understand and I appreciated that.  STRUCTUREThis is a free form poem with no apparent rythme scheme, but the poet does a good job with the dialect to give the poem a nice beat when it's read outloud. MECHANICSI did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. WDC ML is used to increase the font and make easy on the eyes to read. DESCRIPTIONSI liked: "All t'way down Til ya'll git ta t'Cozy Cafe." That's a heck of a directional. I can just imagine finding the Cozy Cafe and scratching my head. PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONSThe opening engages the reader. A light-hearted poem about how to get to Bubba's. It had some comedic beats that will make the reader chuckle. Reviewed by StephB for House Targaryen  }
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You responded to this review 04/12/2024 @ 1:53pm EDT