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 | Bubba's Corner BBQ  [E] Trying to give a tourist directions to Bubba's  |
| (4.5)| GAMES OF THRONES STORY REVIEW This is a review for "Bubba's Corner BBQ" from House Targaryen for "Game of Thrones"  The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise.  THE STORYA local gives a tourist directions to Bubba's Corner BBQ. Better have a receipt and a pen handy to write down where to go!  WHAT I LIKEDI loved the explanation as to why Bubba's wasn't on the corner. A hog got lose and tore through the BBQ, then... ah -- I'll let you check it out for a chuckle or two! It's a good thing I wasn't drinking any coffee at the time. I would have spit it out!  POV NARRATION/TENSEThis is told in the first person by an unnamed narrator. Good job with narration. Past tense is used appropriately. DIALOGUEThe dialogue drives the story. DESCRIPTIONSI liked: "Bubba opened the back door, and it ran squarely into one of those big smokers he had back there." -- Great visual. I could easily picture this happening in my imagination. SETTINGTIME: modern day PLACE: rural setting This is something that is clarified for the reader. CHARACTERSThe narrator The narrator is looking for directions, but I don't think they expected the directions they got.  MECHANICSI did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML to increase the font and make it easy to read on the eyes. PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONSThe opening engages the reader with the opening question: "Do you think you can tell me how to there from here?" A light read that will make you laugh. Reviewed by StephB for House Targaryen  }
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You responded to this review 04/13/2024 @ 6:31am EDT