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The Iron Bank of Braavos  (13+) For G.o.T. Activity #1994693 by Gaby

"Game of Thrones"  Hello fellow writer! My name is Sandra. I am one of the sly foxes. Title: Cat NapFirst Impression: This is a cute ode to the deep, carefree , relaxed sleep of a feline. I have always been amazed that cats will and do sleep anywhere and under any conditions. Oh, look an empty teapot. Now it is not. Of course I can slumber in a windowsill flower box. This shelf is certainly not too narrow for my repose.What needs your attention: Nothing. I cannot suggest any edits, or corrections whatsoever. What I liked best: This poem is definitely not a fantasy or science fiction. As I stated, this is common behaviour for felines. This is entirely believable. And cats are so gosh darn cute doing nothing but sleep. I like this line "so confident of fulfillment." In relationship to napping, I doubt cats ever worry about the outcome. They exude chill. "But cat sleep eludes me." I commiserate. I suppose we think , fret and plan too much. Overall Impression: I too wish I could sleep at the drop of a hat anywhere and at anytime I so choose. I admit I envy relaxed felines. You describe a sleeping cat to a 't.'Thank you for allowing me to read your work. It has been my pleasure. What does the fox say??? Listen carefully. (1326 characters)DISCLAIMER: The views and opinions in this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise.