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![]() | MATCHBOX UNDIES ![]() What was the one thing my Barbie's wardrobe lacked?? ![]() |
GAMES OF THRONES STORY REVIEW In conjunction with: This is a review for "MATCHBOX UNDIES" ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise. ![]() A girl and her Barbie have a lot in common except for... ![]() I picked the story because of the title. Then I read the tag line and I said I had to read this one - it sounds like a hoot! And it was! I enjoyed it very much. ![]() This is told in the first person by a female narrator. Good job with narration. Past tense is used appropriately. ![]() There's enough to set the scenes. I liked: "Being understandably minuscule and almost microscopic ,of Barbie-doll proportions, the lingerie would have to be smaller than a thimble; perhaps nickel-sized, dime-sized?" -- I could easily visualize this in my imagination. ![]() TIME: contemporary - 1960's PLACE: urban setting This is something that is clarified for the reader. ![]() Female narrator & Barbie Our narrator loves her Barbie doll and there's nothing with that. Barbie and the narrator have a lot of adventures - to include clothing adventures. ![]() ![]() I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. ![]() The opening engages the reader. A fun story with several comedic beats that will make one laugh. ![]() "Anniversary Reviews" ![]() ![]() Reviewed by StephB for House Targaryen ![]() ![]()
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