Never Goin Back Again [E] A poem from Fleetwood Mac's song wheel |
"Game of Thrones" "The Iron Bank of Braavos" A Review from "The Iron Bank of Braavos" ! Hi Purple Princess My name is Lyn, I am one of the sly foxes. Title: Never Goin Back Again First Impression: Fleetwood Mac did some amazing songs, and this is one I enjoyed. I like the poem as a poem but I'm not seeing a redacted format. Portions of the original text are kept, while other parts are drawn over or crossed out. What needs your attention: A bit of tweaking will get this as needed. I showed you what your entry should look like. She broke down and let me in Made me see where I've been Been down one time Been down two time I'm never going back again You don't know what it means to win Come down and see me again Been down one time Been down two time Mmm I'm never going back again" What part I liked best: I loved the song choice. Welcome to Redacted poetry, it's a challenge in itself Overall impression: You're a team player, Theresa and we're honored your on our time. But in all honesty, this poem needs some attention. Please don't kills the messenger, it's said with good intentions. The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise. Thank you for allowing me to read your work. It has been my pleasure. What does the Fox say????? It's a frustrating day in the Games My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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