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Game of Thrones and Dragon Chronicles Open in new Window. [ASR]
I will be keeping my Game Of Thrones Stories here
by Princess Megan Snow Rose Author Icon
         Review for entry/chapter: "Fairytale and Fantasy Forum Prompt 27 Dragon" Open in new Window.
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Storyline: A Knight has been summoned by the King to do his duty, kill the Dragon. The knight doesn't want to kill the dragon, but because he is being offered a knighthood in return, he heads off in search of the dragon. He finds the dragon in a cave and goes in after it.

Spelling/Grammar Issues:
He had human feelings how to surviveand enjoy his mate and their children. -I think it's missing a word and needs a space between survive and and.

Description/emotion: The Knight clearly connected to the dragon. Upon learning the dragon had a mate and two baby dragons, the Knight thinks about his pregnant wife. He thinks about his knighthood and what that would mean, but he cannot bring himself to kill the dragon, not when there are little ones for him to care for. He raises his sword several times, but is unable to follow through. When the little ones come running in, they go right for the stranger, and the Knight finds himself kneeling, petting the beasts and happy. His decision is made. Returning to his horse and heading back to the King, he uses his sword to cut himself and goes back to the king.

Overall Impression: This was a really cute story. I loved that mystical picture you included at the bottom. A little Princess and her baby dragons. Nice job, Megan.




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