Fairy’s Favor [E] When the tooth fairy is caught... |
GAMES OF THRONES POEM REVIEW This is a review for "Fairy’s Favor" from House Targaryen for "Game of Thrones" The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise. THE POEM A little girl loses her tooth and can't wait for the tooth fairy to come! WHAT I LIKED This poem captures all the excitement of the tooth fairy - it lessens the pain of losing the tooth for sure and captures all the fun of hiding the tooth in anticipation of a BIG reward in the morning. It's upbeat and uplifting. STRUCTURE This is a poem with ten quaterns. The 1st and 2nd along with the 3rd and 4th lines rythme. MECHANICS I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. The poem is easy to read. The rythme scheme allows for nice, rich emotional beats. DESCRIPTIONS I liked: "A tiny fairy, real phenom, She sat sulking on Mommy's palm." What a great visual! I can easily picture this in my imagination. I'm sure the tooth fairy was pretty mad at getting caught. PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS The title fits the poem. The opening lures the reader in with a nice rythme scheme and keeps them reading. There are twists and turns - especially when the tooth fairy gets busted. A whimsical children's poem that would make a great "Dr. Suess" like children's book. Reviewed by StephB for House Targaryen }
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