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 The 23 Enigma Open in new Window. [E]
23 just seems to be appearing everywhere doesn't it.
by KingsSideCastle Author Icon
Review of The 23 Enigma  Open in new Window.
Review by Jayngle Bells Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hello, KingsSideCastle!

*Checkb*Overall Impression:
The poem's playful tone juxtaposed with the theme of ubiquity and inevitability surrounding this number creates a unique and intriguing exploration. It quickly captures the reader's curiosity with its playful yet mysterious tone.

*Checkb*Form, Rhythm, Cadence, and Style:
The rhyme scheme adds a rhythmic and melodic quality, and the stanzas draw connections between different aspects of life touched by the number 23. The style is engaging, creating a sense of wonder and intrigue that pulls the reader through the poem.

*Checkb*Content:
You've provided an intriguing exploration of the pervasive nature of the number 23. This poem is full of numerical intrigue and leads us through various significant occurrences of the number in daily life and beyond—everything from DNA to theology.

However, some references might seem obscure for those unfamiliar with the 23 Enigma without additional context or explanation. I understand the information is provided in a summary at the end of the poem. Providing a bit more detail via a link or putting the explanation at the top could help those readers better contextualize the poem.

*Checkb*Grammar and Mechanics:
I did not have any concerns with grammar, and you've used the poem's structure to create a new facet of 23 effectively.

*Checkb*Final Thoughts:
This is a delightful and intellectually stimulating poem that plays with the idea of numerical patterns influencing our lives. It's not a topic that I have seen covered often. The entertaining and slightly whimsical take on the subject will help readers learn about and ponder the mysterious patterns that lurk in everyday experiences.

Thank you for sharing your work with us!

Jayngle Bells Author Icon*Smile*


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