Hello, LBidler!

This spiritual article of yours was featured in my "read & review" section and I enjoyed it so I decided to give you a review. I hope you benefit from this review and find it encouraging and uplifting. I also hope you enjoy your time on this site. It is a wonderful community of writers.


INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:
I loved your spiritual devotional article! Well done!

You kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end. Well done!



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

I loved that you started your devotional with a relevant Scripture reference, including the verses.


I enjoyed reading about your spiritual journey and how you learned to run the race marked out for you and learned to focus more and more on the Lord Jesus Christ.


I liked the closing quote. I don't think I've heard of Life Bible Touch Points before. We definitely do need to persevere for the Lord.


I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your devotional. Well done!


Your spirutual devotional was interesting to me, felt like it was coming straight from your heart and soul, and made me want to read your next one. Well done!



IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
I would love to have something great to share here, but I think it's perfect as it is. Well done!



CONCLUSION:
You have a great writing style and heart for the Lord and I enjoyed reading your devotional. Well done!

Thank you for sharing your time, heart, spirit, and writing with the Writing.Com community!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler







Positive Hearts
A Review from: "Positive Hearts Reviews Group" 




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .