Hello, Angelica!

Happy Writing.Com Anniversary month! I loved this poem and I wanted to be sure to celebrate your anniversary with a review (or more if I am able - we'll see!) so I saved it for reviewing in April. I hope you enjoy this review as a celebration of your time here and find the review uplifting.



INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this friendship-themed poem of yours. Well done!

You kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end. Great way to catch my attention, keep it, and make me want to read more of your writing too. Well done!



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

Your poem is short and sweet and, as your friend, I felt honored to read it.

I enjoyed your rhyming.

I liked the refrains.

"I love my friends like you" too! And that was my favorite line in your poem and, I think, the perfect last line for this friendship poem of yours.

I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your friendship poem. Well done!

If you happened to be thinking of running a challenge after Game of Thrones ends, I would love it if you created your own version of Express it in Forty Words (which I'm pretty sure this poem was written for). I sure do miss that challenge. I'd be glad to come up with prompts for you if you ever ran out of ideas. And I'd donate to the cause. Just a thought.



IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
I would love to have something great to share here, but I think it's lovely as it is. Well done!

My one suggestion has nothing to do with improving your writing. It's to hand-write or print this poem off and give it to one (or more) of your in-person friends. And your Mom. Who was likely your very first friend. I think she'd love that, especially a handwritten one if you choose your Mom. That's just my two cents though. Take it or leave it, as serves you best.




CONCLUSION:
You have written a lovely friendship poem that I enjoyed reading and that touched my heart and made me even more glad that we're friends. Well done!

Thank you for sharing your time, heart, community spirit, and writing with the Writing.Com community!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler











Positive Hearts
A Review from: "Positive Hearts Reviews Group" 





My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .