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 | One Way  [13+] This place is called One Way - one way in and one way out. A "Screams" Daily Winner  |
| (5.0)| A "Game of Thrones" by Gaby  ReviewStoryline: Oh so very creepy. Damn, I'm still trying to shake that chill from my spine! Alex and Melissa are on a drive in the middle of nowhere. The GPS cannot tell them where they are. They trade banter about it when the car suddenly dies. Their dog, Sheba, is excited to get out of the car and go on a walk to try and find help. That's when they discover One Way. Spelling/Grammar Issues: None Description/emotion: You can always tell when a couple has been together for a while by the way they interact with one another. I liked this couple a lot, and their banter was great. Good description of the narrow road they are on, worried about an oncoming car. And the sudden disappearance of their vehicle and the house, which appears out of nowhere. That truly creeped me out. That older man put an image of Lurch in my mind. Tall, slim, gaunt. Not sure if that's what you were going for, but that's where my mind went. Overall Impression: What a choice to make. Their options were clear enough, pointed out by the older man, and I wasn't surprised that Melissa wasn't fooling around and went for it. That character has spunk. Alex seemed thankful and relieved that Melissa took the decision out of his hands. Great job. The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise. 
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