Nobody [13+] A Parolee meets Nobody |
Hello Chrys O'Shea! This review is given on behalf of "Game of Thrones" This is a good story that touches the heart in more ways than one. It's a creative and imaginative story with a chilling plot. The Title and Description - Perfect title for this story. It fits the plot in multiple ways. The description caught my attention and urged me to read on! The Storyline/Plot - A woman gets out of jail and gets on a bus heading for her destination. The bus stops at a restaurant. She goes in for a hot bowl of soup, on a cold, snowy day when she meets someone that will touch her heart and rattle her at the same time. Will she believe the truth? The Characters - Your writing allows the parolee's personality to shine through. Though she's quiet and reserved, she also has a very kind heart and is not afraid of helping others. We can feel the little boy's sadness and loneliness through your words. The Setting - You do a good job with the descriptions and details, so the reader can easily envision each scene as we read. What I Liked Best - The ending. It's a great twist ending. I also like how the title and the beginning of the story come full circle. Thank you so much for sharing this story with us. I enjoyed it. Tracey The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise. My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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