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| (4.5)| A "Game of Thrones" by Gaby  ReviewStoryline: A police officer is on the witness stand testifying at a jury trial. Mr. Starr, with his Rolex and expensive suit, does his best to control the officer, making remarks that try to put the officer in question. Spelling/Grammar Issues: None Description/emotion: Good descriptions of the attorney, Mr. Starr. I wonder if this is about Kenneth Starr or if the name fits. Either way, it worked. He is relaxed in the courtroom, putting on his show for the jury. The officer, on the other hand, reads the attorney well, and tries his best to get the upper hand. I liked that he reminded himself that he should have addressed the jury and proceeded to do so when questioned further. Overall Impression: I laughed at the moon comment, given that there were precise miles spouted by the officer. Mr. Starr certainly knew when he'd been played and decided that backing off and moving on would be a better bet for him and his client. I've sat on a jury, and the room gets so tense. Laughter seems to be the only way to break that tension as the proceedings progress. I liked that you use your real life experience in your writing. Though I am curious if this really happened and the names have been changed to protect the innocent  The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise.  
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