Hi Theactual Treasure. You wrote in the brief introduction to your beautiful poem to read and enjoy! Wow, I certainly did! The title, Sun Kissed, is what caught my eye, but I had no idea of the beauty inside of the item!

The words you chose were breathtakingly pure poetry. I liked the first stanza, where you described dawn as a brushstroke, painting the drowsy clouds. I never heard a sunrise described in this way before. I thought it was extremely creative of you, and I can see that you are a talented poet.

All of your stanzas awaken the senses of your readers. We can see the sunrise, hear the bird songs, and feel the breeze..It was all very pretty writing.

I liked that you spoke about bees buzzing and leaves rustling. I thought all of this added to the theme of the sun-kissed day. I could picture all of these things from your great descriptions. It all painted the picture which you were trying to achieve, and you did succeed in that, in my opinion.

What I was impressed most about your cheery poem, was that you were able to add so many stanzas to it! Each one as beautiful as the next. I think if I had to pick one to be a favorite, I would probably choose. the one where you described the puffy clouds like castles in the sky, surrounded by splashes of color. I thought that was very unique.

You transformed the poem from sunrise to sunset, and then to starry night. The twilight was a nice in between, where your readers can envision the scene of night time coming and imagine the diamonds in the sky.

I liked the closure. Well done.


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