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 | The Surprise in the Shed  [E] A rainy night surprise  |
| (5.0)| GAMES OF THRONES POEM REVIEW This is a review for "The Surprise in the Shed" from House Targaryen for "Game of Thrones"  The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise.  THE POEMA story about unlocked shed on a rainy night that needs to get locked. When the woman goes out to lock the shed up, she's in for quite a surprise!  WHAT I LIKEDI loved how the poem told a story. There's a nice, light comedic tone to the poem with nice rhythmic beats that match emotional beats.  STRUCTUREThis is a ten stanza poem with four lines each.. The 1st and 3rd along with the 2nd and 4th lines rythme. The poem is has a nice beat when read out loud MECHANICSI did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. Good use of WDC ML to increase the font and make it easier to read on WDC. The poem is easy to read. DESCRIPTIONSI liked: "With light in hand, I slowly crept, and there I saw a hairless tail." -- It's a nice, easy visual that's easy to imagine, but not only that, it builds suspense well, uncovering the "thing" in the shed. What's next?! PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONSThe title is perfect for the poem, and the opening engages the reader. This a fun, enjoyable read that I think readers can really identify with. Reviewed by StephB for House Targaryen  }
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