Hallo!
You've brought out an extremely important issue in today's era. Screens are indeed taking over young lives and this is indeed harmful.

I appreciate the various aspects of damage you've highlighted. You speak directly and informally so that anyone can understand and receive your message.

Suggestions:
Do look at the layout - you seem to have copy pasted this from another software. Also take another look at where you have bullet points. And, I didn't understand the French!

Thank you for highlighting this vital issue.



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