I love it!

You've narrated the whole story in vivid detail, using a rhyme scheme and verse structure that perfectly suits the action. I could actually feel the excitement building and wanted to know what happened! The last line gives a great message.

Just a note - seeing the word 'crabby' in the title, and misreading the second as 'days' (weak eyesight!) I at first thought it was about someone being crabby or grumpy! I'm glad it wasn't, this was much more fun to read.

Thanks for sharing,
Write On,
Sonali

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