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Given: May 4, 2024 at 6:24pm
Length: 923 Characters |
868 w/o WritingML
Well, this is a very short story, and I feel that my review will be longer than it. That being said, you have someone talking about getting a series of panic attacks, which bother them to no end. Sometimes one must face certain things, in order to get past them.
Thoughts
An interesting piece, but I have some questions: What was the cause of the original panic attack? Was this written for a contest? (If so, a link would be good.)
Spelling and Grammar
There are some issues that come to mind. You have some extra-long sentences that could be broken into at least two, like the first. You don't need to have a space before punctuation. Also, last section could be something like, "subside (Comma), then (instead of than) disappear."
Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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