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Given: May 4, 2024 at 11:17pm
Length: 1,081 Characters |
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Hello fellow writer. Happy WDC Anniversary. This is a heartfelt poem that raises some provocative questions. You have a great voice here. In a thoughtful, gentle manner you are asking do we ever truly know anyone? People are complicated, complex and often do not present or show their true emotions, or opinions to others. Everyone knows fears, regrets, "errors of judgement, lies, failures, fiascos , debts." "We hope they will remain unseen, unknown , and be buried with us, left alone." This is not only well written, but it rhymes effortlessly. You suggest food for thought and most importantly, compassion. I have never heard delivered such a eulogy. Most often, I have listened to superlatives and successes touted. Significant moments and loved ones are usually mentioned. The wording of this poem is wonderful. Do we all hide behind masks? Are we all actors going through the motions? After reading this, I am nodding my head in agreement. Thank you for sharing and speaking some truths. Perhaps there should be more eulogies like this.
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