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 | Mending Fences  [E] Cowboy's thoughts on life.  |
| (4.0)| Hallo! Since the term 'mending fences' could (I think) mean making up after a quarrel or reuniting after an estrangement, the title intrigued me. I was surprised when it was about actual, physical fences and I wonder if you intended this ... ? The poem made me think about someone I had never considered before - a guy on horseback mending fences. The imagery is evocative. The sentiment expressed at the end - happy to have a job though it is hard - is thought provoking. I'm not sure if you've gone in for a particular rhyme scheme, but my reading wasn't very smooth. Maybe you'd like to read it aloud and tweak it a bit if you think that's necessary. Also, maybe you'd like to use some WritingML line font, size, center and line-space. Thanks for sharing this one! Write On, Sonali  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 05/11/2024 @ 4:48pm EDT