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 I've Seen Hope Open in new Window. [E]
A poem about someone who inspires me to try a little harder when I feel like giving up.
by Buterflydreams Author Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Tulipp* Greetings, Buterflydreams! I am reviewing this because today is your 17th Writing.com Anniversary! *Smile*

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*Tulipo* The Positives/What I Liked

         *Bulletv* This is a great piece filled with hope. I really like how you present "hope" in each stanza--with a smile, a heart, a soul, and finally...with feathers. *Heart*

         *Bulletg* I also like that this does not rhyme. It first appears like a poem that should rhyme, but it's actually centered free-verse set in four stanzas plus one line. The reason I like that it's not a rhyming poem, is that it doesn't feel forced at all. It flows so freely and is enjoyable to read through.

         *Bulletp* My favorite stanza is the third (although I like them all.) I like how you write that hope has a soul exhibiting every laugh, dream, love, and tear.

         *Bulletb* The independent line at the end wraps it all up. *Smile*


*Tulipo* Suggestions/Comments to Consider

         I don't have any suggestions. You were consistent with not using punctuation throughout this piece. There were no spelling or grammar issues. Good work!


*Tulipo* Final Thoughts

         My daughter's name is Hope. My mother's name was Hope. And I have a granddaughter named Grace Hope. As you can imagine, I'm quite partial to hope. *Heart* I enjoyed reading this piece about hope, whether she is a human friend or just plain hope, she is always there for you. Thank you for sharing! *Smile*


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