Greetings, nightfairy! I am reviewing this because this is your WDC Anniversary Month.
One year old! I hope you have many more account anniversaries here. It a great community. ![Heart *Heart*](https://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/e21/heart.png)
First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.
The Positives/What I Liked
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This is beautifully and painfully written. To leave someone you love, hurts; but to stay with that person, hurts even more.
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What is one to do? As painful as it might be, it's better to stay away. Eventually, time will begin to heal. But that, of course, is your choice. You mention you are soulmates. Is it possible to be friends?
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My favorite lines are...
Line 5: I see you in everything
Line 10: but with you, it hurts more
Line 13: I know you want nothing to do with me
Line 15: we're soulmates
So many emotions in those lines.
Suggestions/Comments to Consider
Line 3:
seeing you scare the hell out of me
seeing you scares the hell out of me
Line 12:
somedays that seem impossible
somedays that seems impossible
Line 14:
but something seems always pulls us together
but something seems always to pull us together
Everything else looks great!
Final Thoughts
I noticed you haven't been here for a few months. I hope you are okay and that you'll come back. Your poem is well-written and I've no doubt you have more to write about and share.
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We all carry truths about ourselves we don't like to admit, but that's only human. They make for great poetry!
Happy One-Year WDC Anniversary!
Have a great day and...![Quill *Quill*](https://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/e21/quill.png)
K e e p on W r i t i n g !
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