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 Unbaked Banana Bread  [E]
A poem tribute for National Banana Bread Day.
by GERVicious Ghoul 💀
Review by SeptemberBee
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.

*Reading* THE POEM

A poem dedicated to the emotional challenges of making banana bread. It's the endless question - to bake or not to bake?

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

This is a fun, lighthearted poem that a lot of people can identify with.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is free form poem. The 1st and 2nd and 3rd and 4th lines rythme in each stanza.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes. The poem is easy to read and has a nice flow when read out loud.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: "A speckled friend sat on the kitchen shelf," It's playful and intriguing. It doesn't take the reader long to figure out it's a banana. It's a great visual that one can picture in their imagination and puts the reader in a curious mood.


*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The opening engages the reader, venting their curiousity and compelling them to keep reading. The title fits the poem well. The poem is lighthearted and fun.

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