Hello, Beholden!

INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:
Wow! You wrote a fantastic poem personifying the last leaf on an autumn tree.

You kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end.



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:

Happy Writing.Com Anniversary day and month! I read this poem sometime in the past and loved it, but didn't have time to review it right then, so I flagged it for an anniversary review (meaning I saved the link to it in a special "May" file. I hope you enjoy this review as a celebration of your time here and find the review uplifting.

You engaged my senses and emotions as I read this philosophical nature poem of yours.

I was happy to see it placed as a winner in the Shadows and Light Poetry Contest for round 98. Congratulations! That's a contest I always mean to enter. I rarely place though, so I greatly admire those who do!

I loved that your thumbnail picture for this philosophical nature poem of yours is perfect for the poem.

I loved the ending. Probably the last line was my favorite because it made me relate to the leaf. Who knew it was even possible to relate to a leaf? You did!

I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your philosophical nature poem.

I thought the genres you selected were perfect for this philosophical nature poem of yours.


IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
I would love to have something great to share here, but I think it's wonderful as it is. Well done!


CONCLUSION:
You have a great writing style and I greatly enjoyed reading your philosophical nature poem.

Thank you for sharing your time, creativity, heart, spirit, and writing with the Writing.Com community!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler













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